Tit for Tat....:D ;)

[Soumya]

Tha khwaaish ek dil ko mere dil k sath dhadakne ki,
Sazaa diya maine uss dil ko na dhadakne ki,
Bhul gayi thi mein dil dhadaktaa hai mera bhi,
Ruk sakti hai uski dhad-kane kisi aur ki sazaa se bhi ...........

Kiya tha usne kitne vaade mujhe khush rakhne ki,
Paagal na samjhi mein uss fariyaadon ko diwane ki,
Kiyaa fariyaaden maine kisi aur k samne jab kabhi,
Na samjha woh bhi jaise maine ki thi kabhi....

Yeh binti hai meri, sunlo yaaron..
dhadaknaa chaahe jo dil tumhare saath,
usko naa todo..

Thaam lo woh haath
Jo chaahe tumhaara saath
Kya pataa tum kal badhaao haath
Aur koi haath ho na ho .....

[Gituli]

Nice poem
I may not agree to the sentiment of the poem, but the theme goes nicely

[Akiv]

Wonderful work Soumya! Considering hindi is not ur first language, u have expressed the feelings of being loved beautifully:)

[Soumya]

Thanks guys

[Vishesh]

nice poem .....great effort

[Soumya]

Dhanyabad Vishesh ji

[Mari]

nice poem Soumya
though i also dont agree with the sentiments something like 2 sided

[Gituli]

[samrat]

"sunlon yaaron" bahut nautanki and funny thila didi and last line was quite optimistic...u dint say "kal ho na ho"...means we will be there for sure...but the other person might not be there anymore because he/she refused our proposal..waah...waah