Tit for Tat....:D ;)

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Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Soumya » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:46 pm

Tha khwaaish ek dil ko mere dil k sath dhadakne ki,
Sazaa diya maine uss dil ko na dhadakne ki,
Bhul gayi thi mein dil dhadaktaa hai mera bhi,
Ruk sakti hai uski dhad-kane kisi aur ki sazaa se bhi ........... :cry:

Kiya tha usne kitne vaade mujhe khush rakhne ki, :pray:
Paagal na samjhi mein uss fariyaadon ko diwane ki, :snooty:
Kiyaa fariyaaden maine kisi aur k samne jab kabhi,
Na samjha woh bhi jaise maine ki thi kabhi.... :doh:

Yeh binti hai meri, sunlo yaaron..
dhadaknaa chaahe jo dil tumhare saath,
usko naa todo.. :naughty:

Thaam lo woh haath
Jo chaahe tumhaara saath
Kya pataa tum kal badhaao haath
Aur koi haath ho na ho .....;) :violin:

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Gituli » Tue May 01, 2012 5:46 pm

Nice poem :clap:
I may not agree to the sentiment of the poem, but the theme goes nicely :)
...It's All In the Mind...

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Akiv » Tue May 01, 2012 5:48 pm

Wonderful work Soumya! Considering hindi is not ur first language, u have expressed the feelings of being loved beautifully:)

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Soumya » Tue May 01, 2012 10:43 pm

Thanks guys :)

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Vishesh » Fri May 04, 2012 8:04 pm

nice poem .....great effort
urvish

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Soumya » Mon May 07, 2012 10:36 am

Dhanyabad Vishesh ji :)

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Mari » Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:24 am

nice poem Soumya :) :clap:
though i also dont agree with the sentiments ;) something like 2 sided ;)

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby Gituli » Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:52 pm

:)
...It's All In the Mind...

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Re: Tit for Tat....:D ;)

Postby samrat » Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:14 pm

"sunlon yaaron" bahut nautanki and funny thila didi :-D and last line was quite optimistic...u dint say "kal ho na ho"...means we will be there for sure...but the other person might not be there anymore :-P because he/she refused our proposal..waah...waah


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